- Clean lines and good photo
- Very good research and planning preparation
- The cover is a bit plain
- More cover lines are needed in the left side third
- More 'Music' contents
- Bring model closer to camera (close up shot)
- Article is too short
- Needs to be double the length
- Need to look at actual articles to know what questions to ask.
Cover
- Change positioning and font of the cover lines
- Move the barcode to the left
- Great image
- 'magazine' is too long, needs to be in line with the 'N'
- Needs more than three areas ofsub headings
- Text needs work- look at real contents pages for ideas
- Too much space in some areas
- Remember its a music magazine
- Columns need to be the same width
- Good use of fonts
- Move the page number and website
- Not enough text
- Only five questions
- Read a few articles and copy the style
- More columns
- Brilliant images
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